Developing Self and Others examples

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[S] After delivering a presentation to senior managers, I received informal feedback that while my content was strong, my pacing was too fast and I had not left enough time for questions. Around the same time, a colleague mentioned they were anxious about an upcoming presentation to the same audience.

[T] I needed to improve my own presentation skills and support my colleague to deliver a confident presentation.

[A] I asked my manager for a follow-up meeting to discuss the feedback in detail and identify specific techniques to slow my pace. I practised with a timer and recorded myself to review. For my colleague, I offered to run a practice session. I shared the techniques I was learning, including pausing after key points and explicitly inviting questions. I also shared my own recording to show that improvement was a process, not an instant fix. I gave specific, actionable feedback on their draft and rehearsed with them twice.

[R] My next presentation received positive feedback for pacing and engagement. My colleague's presentation was well-received, and they told me the practice sessions had reduced their anxiety significantly. My manager asked me to include presentation coaching in our team's development plan.

✓ Why this scores well
  1. Shows self-awareness by seeking and acting on feedback rather than dismissing it.
  2. Demonstrates generosity by sharing what you are learning, not just what you already know.
  3. Uses specific techniques (timer, recording, pausing after key points) rather than vague advice.
  4. Shows that development is ongoing — the colleague's success and the team plan show lasting impact.

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